Re: Bookstorm
Noel Gayle: by humans and orcs and dem, gimme a better idea
michael webster: Humans, Gobbo, Orcs and Hobgobbos will be the main races
Noel Gayle: ok
Noel Gayle: what are the realtions like
michael webster: Not sure yet
michael webster: mutual distrust and hatred would suite the setting
Noel Gayle: yeah
Noel Gayle: but then, how do they live?
michael webster: I was thinking that the war would have a huge impact on current relations
Noel Gayle: yeah
Noel Gayle: definitely
michael webster: Like in medevil times
michael webster: Feudal society
Noel Gayle: ....ahhhh
michael webster: lords and serfs
Noel Gayle: ahhh
michael webster: with the mobnster races having slaves as well
Noel Gayle: scattered pockets of power
michael webster: yeah
Noel Gayle: makes sense
michael webster: maybe a one king here and there
Noel Gayle: ....self appointed king, not really recognised outside of his jurisdiction, you mean
Noel Gayle: you read a game of thrones, and the sequels...?
Noel Gayle: quick question
Noel Gayle: did you stop selling herbal life products?
Noel Gayle: and why?
Noel Gayle: cause I'm thinking of looking into it...?
Noel Gayle: but back to the setting
Noel Gayle: so, its a feudal society
Noel Gayle: with orc, human, goblins and hobgoblins
Noel Gayle: being the most visible races
Noel Gayle: all others are in hiding
Noel Gayle: any idea on who these other races are
Noel Gayle: elves I know should be there
Noel Gayle: and I vote for fae
michael webster: yeah I think, with Eddar Stark
Noel Gayle: yesah
Noel Gayle: just using it as a reference for a low magic setting, that devolved into a feudal setting
michael webster: Noel Gayle: ....self appointed king, not really recognised outside of his jurisdiction, you mean: Yeah
michael webster: Yeah All races in the books we have are there
michael webster: its a bog world
michael webster: i want people to know that
michael webster: *big
Noel Gayle: cool beans
michael webster: In my mind, humans know nothing about the outside
michael webster: world
Noel Gayle: ok
michael webster: cept for orces and dem
michael webster: damn son
michael webster: Lets start slow
Noel Gayle: yeah
Noel Gayle: YEAH
michael webster: Ok fart
Noel Gayle: this thing is threatening to bloat already
michael webster: First character, a boy and his siblings
michael webster: lets say he is 17
Noel Gayle: ok
Noel Gayle: mmm
michael webster: So this what I had in mind
Noel Gayle: we need to talk over the phone, can I call you?
Noel Gayle: go ahear
Noel Gayle: ahead
michael webster: Through his eyes our readers will discover the world
michael webster: So he cant jknow shit
Noel Gayle: ok
Noel Gayle: before we do anything else, I have a book to give you
michael webster: ok
michael webster: sta
michael webster: sat
Noel Gayle: its my most treasured book, so treat it well
michael webster: ok what class
Noel Gayle: hmmm
michael webster: ok what book name
michael webster: Fighter?
Noel Gayle: On Writing, by Stephen King
michael webster: ohhh
michael webster: nice
michael webster: shit dawg I dont feel comfortable boprrowing that
Noel Gayle: kat got it for me, when I told her that I wanted to write
Noel Gayle: dog
Noel Gayle: come on
michael webster: its cool I will DL it when I get home lol
Noel Gayle: lol
Noel Gayle: do that
Noel Gayle: but it would be better if you carry it with you and read
Noel Gayle: so I will lend it to you
michael webster: if i find it i will let you know so you can bring itf I dont
Noel Gayle: no worries dog,
Noel Gayle: so anyway
Noel Gayle: fighter
michael webster: yeah simple and sweet
Noel Gayle: depends, where you want to go with him
Noel Gayle: think about where he's going to end up
michael webster: Mounted warrior route
Noel Gayle: ah
Noel Gayle: nomads
michael webster: Knighthood in his future
Noel Gayle: AHH
Noel Gayle: ok
michael webster: No country bumpkin town yute
Noel Gayle: lol
Noel Gayle: zeem
Noel Gayle: zeen
michael webster: serious he has to be ignorant but not stupid
Noel Gayle: ok
michael webster: ok
michael webster: basically
Noel Gayle: smart but not knowledgable
michael webster: yeah
Noel Gayle: yeah
Noel Gayle: go on
michael webster: His town is a fromtier town so all men train in the militia
Noel Gayle: ok
michael webster: fuck that
michael webster: everyone trains in the militia
michael webster: men women and children
Noel Gayle: ...makes sense
Noel Gayle: its a hard world
Noel Gayle: a real brutal, gritty setting
michael webster: Thats why him wicked cause him start training young
Noel Gayle: nice
michael webster: yeah
Noel Gayle: yeah
Noel Gayle: good, feeling that
michael webster: Gobbos raid every few years sio they have to be ready cuase you never know when kinda thing
Noel Gayle: major raid is every few years, there're always a few skirmishes now and then
Noel Gayle: so the town is always on alert
michael webster: ye something like
michael webster: that
Noel Gayle: ok
Noel Gayle: lemme know what y ou're thinking, when you're done laying it out I'll comment
Noel Gayle: *shuts up*
michael webster: what?
Noel Gayle: no
Noel Gayle: write down your thoughts uninterrupted
michael webster: huh?
Noel Gayle: listen
Noel Gayle: I'm gonna stop talking
Noel Gayle: and you write down your thoughts uninterrupted until you feel empty
Noel Gayle: and then
Noel Gayle: I'll comment
Noel Gayle: let it flow
Noel Gayle: start
Noel Gayle: from the top
Noel Gayle: whatever you're thinking
Noel Gayle: *waits*
michael webster: Ok
michael webster: Lets see point form
michael webster: Start of the book we set the stage, let people now seh is good yute
michael webster: loves his people and town
michael webster: gobbo come and kill everything
michael webster: I was thinking of making him a tragioc hero by having him kill all the twons childremn tos pare them a fate worse than death
michael webster: So he leaves two and joins the Kings army
michael webster: does well and is soon recognised as a star
michael webster: So thats about ten chapters right there
michael webster: But wait
michael webster: next charater; do you want to take this one? Oh Each chapeter will be from a characters perspective
Noel Gayle: ok
Noel Gayle: lemme say this
Noel Gayle: if he's going to kill the towns children, then maybe they all need to be mortally or grievously wounded in teh attack
Noel Gayle: and he can only keep two alive
michael webster: ok his sister should be one
Noel Gayle: and he kills the rest, so that they don't have to suffer
michael webster: yeah
michael webster: oh I did plan to leave him for dead so yeah that works
Noel Gayle: ...you need help
Noel Gayle: but ok
michael webster: I knowww thats why i called on you duhhh
Noel Gayle: lol
Noel Gayle: two siblings
michael webster: twins?
michael webster: lol
michael webster: twin sisters
Noel Gayle: ...maybe
Noel Gayle: no
michael webster: ok
michael webster: ok
Noel Gayle: one sister
michael webster: ok
Noel Gayle: are any of them gonna be magic users
Noel Gayle: cause I just had an idea
Noel Gayle: here it is
Noel Gayle: three people
Noel Gayle: the three states
Noel Gayle: magic is VERY dangerous and feared in this setting
Noel Gayle: so
Noel Gayle: he uses no magic
Noel Gayle: fuck
Noel Gayle: three people
Noel Gayle: him, his sister
michael webster: His sister is a sorcerer
Noel Gayle: ok
michael webster: I had that in mind
michael webster: Either that or she is a psion
Noel Gayle: I vote that she be a psion
michael webster: I was thinking psion
Noel Gayle: and the next kid be the sorcerer
michael webster: L:et her have nightmares about the night of the attack
Noel Gayle: YEAH
michael webster: before it happens
Noel Gayle: and no one listens
michael webster: Yeah
michael webster: except him
Noel Gayle: the town thinks that she is a little crazy from birth, anyway
michael webster: lol
Noel Gayle: him and the next kid
Noel Gayle: maybe?
Noel Gayle: listen to my plans for the next kid
michael webster: The next kid could be an outcast hermits son or something liek that
Noel Gayle: aha
michael webster: oh sorry go ahead lol
Noel Gayle: exactly
Noel Gayle: no probs
michael webster: nice
Noel Gayle: I was thinking that he has no parents
michael webster: Artistic diffrences my ass
michael webster: yeah it figures
Noel Gayle: and either his parents died when he was young
Noel Gayle: lol
michael webster: or he doesnt know what became of them
Noel Gayle: yeah
Noel Gayle: no memory (but that is SO over done)
Noel Gayle: and the town adopted him
Noel Gayle: and he's always been drawn to the sister
michael webster: yeah lets make it so he is topo young to remember
Noel Gayle: and because of that, the main hero puts up with him
Noel Gayle: yeah
michael webster: How old is she?
Noel Gayle: young and virginal
Noel Gayle:
michael webster: 14-15? or younger
michael webster: lol
Noel Gayle: 14-15 sounds good
michael webster: ok
michael webster: We should be talking notes
Noel Gayle: I'll save the convo
This message was last edited by the GM at 21:02, Tue 04 Dec 2007.
