Quinlan Fairfellow:
Kool, some feedback:
When you actually posted, the adventure moved forward with some ease, but the pauses where far too many and too long. I understand you have a busy schedule, but find it ironic that I: father of two and highly trained scientist working across the globe, should find more time to log on every week and post a few lines.
You winged the plot well; it wasn't epic, but not dull either. However, try to plan ahead some more. It makes the players feel like you care a little for the campaign.
Best of luck in the future DM'ing!
Well, put plain and simply, the one reason I'm not a good GM is, that I'm not reliable. I'm too much of a procrastinator, and too reluctant to do the work. I can do it, fairly easily, and it's not bad, but I have trouble making myself sit down and work on it, like with everything else in my life. May have something to do with my ADHD.
Anyway, I'll try to finish this in a round or two. I've got some twists that could end it quick, and drop it to a few story posts, which I can keep up with, because it's all off the top of my head(like the conversation with the guard captain, if you remember).
