Re: CHAPTER 3: Blood in the Water
Raven tilted his head to the side.
"Hey, wait a minute, I've heard of those two guys before. It's been a long time, but yeah I think I still remember the story; there was an ancient warrior who went to Masamune to have a sword made, and the weapons smith agreed to do the work. However he said it would take one year to complete, while an evil apprentice named Muramasa offered to make a sword in only half the time. The warrior wanted that blade, and received in the quoted amount of time. However, when he grasped it, the evil of Muramasa was transferred into the Warrior. He was transformed into the Black Samurai, and with the Sword of Doom he terrorized the lands. Masamune however had begun work on his sword at the same time as Muramasa, and after a year it was completed. This weapon, the Sword of Fate, was presented by the Smith to a beast called the Green Dragon. The Dragon found the Black Samurai, and the two battled long and hard in the sky. Finally the evil warrior was defeated, and he was trapped in the Sword of Doom.
"Hundreds of years later, a group of people were tricked into finding the Sword of Doom by a woman who wished to free the Black Samurai, so she could enslave him and turn Japan back into a Feudal country. The group that found the evil weapon, who had thought they were stopping the warrior from rising the entire time, were captured save for two of them. The remaining pair ran for their lives, and by chance hid in a sushi restaurant. The minions of the woman swarmed the place to get them, but the owner who was also the cook defeated them. He then revealed himself to be a Samurai as well, and told the two he saved the only way to stop evil from flooding the land by that point was to find the Sword of Fate and battle the Black Samurai. In order to do that, these two had to become Samurai themselves.
"The pair had always been cowardly, running from trouble, hiding in fear, and they didn't like the prospect of facing off against such a power force of evil. However, they agreed and were trained. They found the Sword of Fate and the Green Dragon, the latter agreeing to help them and flowing into the blade. Then with the enchanted weapon and their Master the chef, the two new warriors returned to where the woman was trying to summon the Black Samurai. She succeeded, but evil power like that can't be controlled, and she got knocked out cold when she tried.
"Once more the Swords of Doom and Fate were locked in battle, until the one of Doom was broken. The evil poured out of it, and the Black Samurai dropped to the ground. When his mask was removed, he was found to be a very old man. He thanked those who defeated him, for now without the evil of his blade to hold him to the mortal world he could pass on. Then he smiled, closed his eyes, and faded into nothing.
"As for your story, I'm sorry but that thing is dumb, with a capital D-U-M-B. It's got plot holes so big, I could fly a ship through them. First of all, they're supposed to be having a contest, but they never picked a judge? Really? How exactly did they think they'd decide a winner, flip a coin? Good blind luck a monk happened by, or else those two might still be stuck by that stream.
"That's another thing, why was one sword considered so much better than the other simply because a monk said so? Another weapons smith I could understand, even a Samurai is plausible since they used katanas and would have some idea of what they were talking about, but one single guy with no obvious background in swordplay says 'this one's better', and everyone in an entire country just suddenly goes with it just because he's wearing a robe? Everyone has their own opinion, that's why those two were having a contest to begin with; because the apprentice thought himself better than the Master. So what would have happened in the story if it hadn't been a monk, but a tinker who happened by and he liked the sword that could cut anything? Hell, being a tinker, he would have thought the other one dull and offered to sharpen it.
"Not to mention, the contest itself was pure shit, for the simple fact there were no rules other than 'make a sword'. If I were going to build a ship, it would depend heavily on who I wanted to buy it as what kind of ship it would be; a freight company would want a cargo ship, whereas a Military would have no interest in that but be all for a combat vessel.
"A monk who, no offense, sees meaning in everything from a shooting star to a gnat's fart saying something has deep meaning doesn't really hold much weight. It's what you guys do, what non-monks expect you to do, what the stereotype about you has you doing. I mean geeze, people have come to expect that kind of stuff from your type to the point it was printed on little slips of paper and put in freaking dessert cookies at restaurants. He might have seen the Master's sword as better, but I can promise you if the judge had been an old time General who earned his rank by boot strapping his way up and joined his men in the fray, Muramasa's sword would have won hands down.
"Muramasa's sword was not blood thirsty, that's a load of crap; it was hung over that stream, it didn't make the decision and hang itself there. It also didn't jump from where it was to cut into animals or anything else, it stayed right where its Master put it. It did as it was bid, no more and no less. If its creator had put it on a shelf, it would have sat there and cut nothing.
"Masamune, on the other hand, as far as anyone knows cheated to win that contest. He could have been the one who suggested the stream, knowing it was by a monastery, or he even could have been friends with that monks and known when he'd be out and about. Then he slaps a sword together, doesn't even bother to sharpen the blade, and wins hands down. I mean think about it, all he actually did was prove what his sword couldn't cut. He didn't use it in battle, or give any proof at all the blade would work as a weapon when needed. I mean come on, it wouldn't even cut a leaf on the ground? That would be dead, what harm could cutting that possibly do?
"A weapon is more than simply a killing machine, it is also a tool; for example if I were stuck in some cold tundra, I could use Battle Dawn to blast some rocks and then huddle around them for warmth. I could hunt game so I didn't starve, protect myself from wild creatures, etc..
"Masamune's sword showed it couldn't fill the roll of a tool; he was a Japanese weapons smith who made a blade that couldn't kill fish, in a country where sushi was a main staple of their diet. It couldn't cut wood, so good luck getting firewood to light up the night and ward off creatures, or keeping yourself from freezing in the dark. Keep in mind, at no point did he actually prove the sword could cut anything at all, just what it couldn't, or in the words of the monk, wouldn't do. If someone's charging at me screaming some battle cry, I don't want a sword who decides at that particular moment that war is not the bloody answer...
"Any weapon you see on me right now, I know how to use. I know because I trained, practiced, then used them and learned from real life experience. My guns will fire when I pull the trigger, my sword will cut what I swing it against. If I want it to kill a fish, it will kill a fish, and I will eat. If I am not hungry and do not slice at a fish, it won't cut one. Simple as that.
"If weapons could do all the thinking for us, there'd be no need for warriors at all, would there? I mean if blades and guns could decide who to shoot and cut all on their own, then I'd pretty much be out of a job wouldn't I? Hell, Luci can already fly herself, so I'm surprised I'm not browsing the help wanted section right now.
"Muramasa made something that could admittedly be very dangerous, but he didn't turn around and put it in the hands of a four year old girl either. No women, children, old men, or any men for that matter were hurt by it, just some dead vegetation and water life that was most likely going to end up on someone's rice square at some point anyway. He might have even collected the fish sliced up by his sword and given it to the needy, the story doesn't say one way or the other on that. His blade was made for a Warrior, someone who studied long and hard in the ancient art of Swordplay, who could and would use it as an extension of themselves; muscles to swing the steel, and a honed mind to control the muscles.
"Masamune in short failed to prove he'd created anything other than a super dull blade, at the very best it was a sword with training wheels on it. No training at all needed, just swing it around and it'll decide what to do. Hell as long as you've got three working brain cells, you could be the next Hero of the known lands.
"Muramasa used his knowledge to bring a power to Mankind he felt they were ready for, whereas Masamune felt the Human Race still not ready and in need of more guidance.
"So, who won the contest? Thanks to the gift of Free Will, both of them; we can keep safe with guidance and keep from hurting ourselves, or we can decide we are ready for the real thing and go off on our own to make a mark or greasy stain upon this crazy Universe we all live in, whichever the case may be."