Re: Green Room (OOC)
Well, to me it doesn't really seem out of context...
As an idea, you might consider editing the part before your interaction with Dren, adding a small delay (e.g., instead of just looking briefly at everyone, he could decide to observe them for a few seconds each, maybe even "let them introduce themselves first"), to have a smoother timeline, but it's not really relevant.
And, by the way... Is anyone else not used to writing in past tense? So far it kinda looks like we are a minority :)
Ciaotutti,
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This message was last edited by the player at 08:50, Tue 20 July 2004.