Re: Chapter 4: OOC
Yes, I didn't correct her writing, she made those additions being distracted by Julie ;)
Anyways, obviously, the telepathic link will stay and Zelpuz listens to what Vanyra tells him.
Can he actually see only through her eyes now or two pairs of eyes? Otherwise (assuming it really is bright enough to see a bit) he'll drop the seeing through Vanyra's eyes.