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Used FAST CHARACTER fastcharacter.com it actually had astral elf

Let me know if this looks better and what additional tweaks need to be made.   Thanks

Race/Ancestry/Heritage: Astral Elf
Class & Level: Bard 3 (College of Lore)
Background: Sage
Alignment: Neutral Good
Experience: 981 xp

ABILITY SCORES & ABILITIES
(* includes +2 proficiency bonus; ** includes expertise, if any)

Strength 12
+1 ... Strength Ability Checks
+1 ... Strength Saving Throws
+2 ... Athletics Skill
180 lbs. ... Maximum Carrying Capacity
360 lbs. ... Max. Push or Drag (Speed -5 ft.)
360 lbs. ... Maximum Lift

Dexterity 15
+2 ... Dexterity Ability Checks
+4 ... Dexterity Saving Throws *
+4 ... Acrobatics Skill  *
+3 ... Sleight of Hand Skill
+6 ... Stealth Skill  **


Constitution 10
+0 ... Constitution Ability Checks
+0 ... Constitution Saving Throws

Intelligence 15
+2 ... Intelligence Ability Checks
+2 ... Intelligence Saving Throws
+4 ... Arcana Skill  *
+4 ... History Skill  *
+4 ... Investigation Skill  *
+3 ... Nature Skill
+3 ... Religion Skill

Wisdom 10
+0 ... Wisdom Ability Checks
+0 ... Wisdom Saving Throws
+1 ... Animal Handling Skill
+1 ... Insight Skill
+2 ... Medicine Skill  *
+2 ... Perception Skill  *
+1 ... Survival Skill

Charisma 15
+2 ... Charisma Ability Checks
+4 ... Charisma Saving Throws *
+4 ... Deception Skill  *
+3 ... Intimidation Skill
+6 ... Performance Skill  **
+3 ... Persuasion Skill

COMBAT [PHB p. 189]

12 ... Passive Perception
+3 ... Initiative Modifier

Armor Class 13 ... Armor worn: leather armor
30 ft. Speed ... Base distance per move
18 hit points ... 3d8 Hit Dice


Rapier. Melee Weapon Attack: +4 to hit, reach 5 ft. Hit: 1d8+2 piercing damage.

Dagger (offhand, two-weapon fighting as bonus action). Melee or Ranged Weapon Attack: +4 to hit, reach 5 ft. 1d4 piercing damage. (If thrown, normal range to 20 ft.; disadvantage long range 21 to 60 ft.)

Vicious Mockery Cantrip. Ranged Spell Attack: Target within 60 feet that can hear you must make a DC 12 Wisdom saving throw or take 1d4 psychic damage and have disadvantage on next attack made before the end of its next turn. (No damage if made save.)

FEATURES, TRAITS, SPECIAL ABILITIES

Sage Background [PHB p. 137]
• Feature: Researcher
• Traits: Cunning observant
• Ideal: Knowledge is its own reward
• Bond: Former mentor now a lich.
• Flaw: Detail Oriented


Proficiencies & Languages
• Proficiency Bonus: +2
• Armor: light armor
• Weapons: simple weapons, hand crossbow, longsword, rapier, shortsword
• Tools: musical instrument (flute), musical instrument (lute), musical instrument (lyre)
• Saving Throws: Dexterity, Charisma
• Skills: Acrobatics, Arcana, Deception, History, Investigation, Medicine, Perception, Performance, Stealth
• Languages: Common, Dwarvish, Elvish, Orc


Astral Elf Traits [SJAiS p. 10]

• Creature Type: Humanoid (Fey lineage)
• Age: 420 years old
• Medium Size (5' 6", 136 lbs.)
• Astral Fire (Sacred Flame cantrip)
• Darkvision (60 feet)
• Fey Ancestry (vs. charm, no sleep)
• Keen Senses (Perception)
• Starlight Step (teleport 30 ft., use 2 times betw. long rests)
• Trance (4 hrs. as 8 hrs. sleep)
• Trance Proficiencies (2 betw. long rests)

Bard Class Features [PHB p. 41]
• Ritual Casting
• Bardic Inspiration (d6) (2 uses per day)
• Jack of All Trades (non-prof. bonus)
• Song of Rest (+1d6 hp/rest)
• Expertise (prof. noted with **)
• Cutting Words (insp. vs. enemies)

Vicious Mockery Cantrip. Ranged Spell Attack: Target within 60 feet that can hear you must make a DC 12 Wisdom saving throw or take 1d4 psychic damage and have disadvantage on next attack made before the end of its next turn. (No damage if made save.)

Spellcasting [PHB p. 201]

Spell Attack Modifier +4
Spell Save DC 12

Cantrips Known: Prestidigitation, Vicious Mockery

Prepared Spells
1st Level (4 slots): Detect Magic, Cure Wounds, Charm Person
2nd Level (2 slots): Invisibility, Hold Person

Your traits and etc are stubs I can't connect to the actual choices given. Well, except for Ideal,, which is built for a one word description.

Take a look at the sage choices and send me the full sentence for each. Two for traits. Also, the whole mentor was a lich thing isn't really likely. Lichedom is usually a way not to die o old age. Astral beings don't age. It wouldn't come up outside the Githyanki main government, and that's because it dates back to the Prime and mind flayers. -- Will have a look a let you know

You only picked 5 spells. You get 6 at 3rd level.  OK cool, will have to have a look

https://archive.org/details/sp...20-%20Space%20Lairs/

https://www.dndbeyond.com/camp...in/45491293637940157

Race:
Including stats. Some races have more options, many don't.

Giff
   Str - 10
   Dex -16
   Con - 14
   Int - 10
   Wis - 16
   Cha - 8
Alignment - Neutral Good
Humanoid, Medium, speed is 30 feet,
</i> You have proficiency with all firearms and ignore the loading property of any firearm. In addition, attacking at long range with a firearm doesn’t impose disadvantage on your attack roll.
advantage on Strength-based ability checks and Strength saving throws. In addition, you count as one size larger when determining your carrying capacity and the weight you can push, drag, or lift.
Languages - Common, Celestial

Background: Some have options, some don't. Also include all the personality bits: 2 traits, and Ideal, a Bond, and a Flaw.
Wildspacer - Proficiencies: Survival, Perception, Tough You gain the Tough feat from the Player’s Handbook. In addition, you learned how to adapt to zero gravity. Being weightless doesn’t give you disadvantage on any of your melee attack rolls (see “Weightlessness” below).
Alignment - Lawful neutral

Personality traits- I have a crude sense of humor. I face problems head-on. A simple, direct solution is the best path to success.
Ideals - It is my duty to protect and care for the people beneath me.
bonds - I’ll never forget the crushing defeat my company suffered or the enemies who dealt it.
Flaws - My hatred of my enemies is blind and unreasoning.

Class: always the choice of skills, sometimes other choices. Dont' bother with equipment choices for now. Spells go here, too.
Monk-
Deflect Missiles
Proficiencies- Athletics, Acrobatics, Cartographer's tools
Astral Spark <i>(When you hit a target with a simple or martial weapon, you can cause the target to take extra force damage equal to your proficiency bonus.) You have proficiency with all firearms and ignore the loading property of any firearm.

Subclass:
Way of the Kensei

Agile Parry. If you make an unarmed strike as part of the Attack action on your turn and are holding a kensei weapon, you can use it to defend yourself if it is a melee weapon. You gain a +2 bonus to AC until the start of your next turn, while the weapon is in your hand and you aren’t incapacitated.

Kensei’s Shot. You can use a bonus action on your turn to make your ranged attacks with a kensei weapon more deadly. When you do so, any target you hit with a ranged attack using a kensei weapon takes an extra 1d4 damage of the weapon’s type. You retain this benefit until the end of the current turn.

Way of the Brush. You gain proficiency with your choice of calligrapher’s supplies or painter’s supplies.
Calligrapher's Supplies

Kensei Weapons - Long Bow, Warhammer

I sent him that format and he was happy with it