Here we can continue our out-of-character discussions about the game, our days, comics, movies, and what have you!

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@ The Commander.

Yugioh Abridged was pretty great. Little Kuriboh's (the YTAS creator) portryal is pretty close to the original, just exaggerated and with a lot more flamboyant. Evidantly him saying Yugi-boy was supposed to match him saying 'Yugi-kun' in Japanese, but in English it makes him sound either condescending or creepy.

Little Kuriboh also has a big part in Dragon Ball Z abridged. If you haven't seen it I suggest giving it a watch. They don't hit stride until maybe episode 4 or so but it becomes outright superior to the original show.

Hey, renovated huh?  Do we have a coffee pot in here yet?  I will be posting  in a few as soon as I write my noncanon post -- but I been planning it for three days now.  And I will actually be entering my first battle post EVER.  Damn Khaos and Commander Goonds, how lucky for y'all!  LOL

Peace and roses,
Ma

In reply to Ma Nature (msg # 4):

Howdy ho friends and neighbors, both good and bad:


I am forced to take a small time out in writing my post to ask a newbie question as I thought that I knew the answer, but obviously not.  Should I want to say see Mr. Khaos' sheet to have some notion about his character  other than stuff he watches and reads that I have no clue on cuz I am old and bitchy and etc., where might I find it?  Thanks in advance and feel free to point and laugh.

Peace and roses,
Ma

I'm looking forward to your post, although I think it's hilarious that you were one of the first characters in-game and you still haven't made a battle post. Welcome to the jungle!

From my understanding Khaos is meant to be portrayed as a bit 'off', without being full on insidiously mad like the Joker (or Kane, or Cheshire, very roughly speaking). He's flamboyant, and slightly immature, but not to the extent that it negatively affects his work. Also, I think that he's not necessarily supposed to take a side with either the good or the bad guys- but is mainly motivated by sitting back and keeping things interesting.

Khaos's player could undoubtedly express it better than me- or just straight up confirm that I'm still getting it wrong, though.


Also:
Damn it Kane! How am I meant to conquer a new thread for the glorious Commander Empire with you shitposting everywhere?! OOC Chat 3 will be mine for sure!

Dear Commander

Much thanks for the info, and I will also be waiting for Mr. Khaos who will either correct you or not and also tell me if he can fly or whatnot.  Also, a note of gratitude that he is not as mad as the Joker!

And it is funny that I was amongst the first here.  I was nervous as heck when I posted myself in Central Park.  And I was gonna whup up on that brat whassisname that Scrips ran or runs or whatever.  I even asked Thor to bring him to me, but that got sideways due to a character not wanting to be hauled anywhere.  So I have been waiting and watching from the sidelines, cheering for the excellent writing when I could read it all.  Not enough time!  And running my smart mouth on the OOC.

And Commander, just let me give you a hint:

rats.

Peace and roses,
Ma

Found him after a more careful search through credits!

I'm not even sure where Kane's going to go next. Probably Maine, whether he gets caught or not. I'm hesitant to send him to NY, because my other character is there.

Kane! Come to Vegas and meet Oculus, or Chicago and fight Crimson.

Commander's getting sick of having to replace all his lieutenants, and my other other characters need the occasional kick up the arse too.

While Kane has already been to Vegas, that isn't such a bad idea.

Crimson could turn Kane to paste easily enough, but Kane's not dumb enough to let him.

OOPS!  heh

It is submitted!  And to celebrate,  I send you all a couple of these inspirations for Ma.  I am sure that there are more.

Peace and roses,
Ma







https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LLrTPrp-fW8


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ijVijP-CDVI

I would like to thank everyone for their immeasurable patience, and announce that the judging is complete. You all submitted wonderful entries which did not make my task easy yet were a joy to read, and I hope you all are pleased with the final result. I tried to meld all your posts into one, requiring me to add some material here and there yet I tried to keep as much original material as possible. I do hope everyone is pleased with the outcome, I am sorry it took so long, and if anyone spots any mistakes please let me know and I will edit them post haste.:)

Also, a warm welcome to all our new players!

Great work Black Magic! It had to be no easy task!

A round of applause for the man of mysterious magic! Excellent work; glad you were able to weave some of each of our best bits together. Commander's Dieter vs. Kane battle is really the tensest fight we've had so far and I'd like to know how he thought that scene through. Plus, Kane's conclusion helps move things along very nicely.

Overall, I think my favorite bit that I wrote was the heroes' preparations, while my favorite bit that Commander wrote was the DvK fight and his overall usage of Kane (plus, Dieter's encounter with Brianna was great). I'm glad those bits were all included. Thanks for putting in all the work to write this out, Homer!

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With the conclusion of this, I think we're ready to skip a few weeks or month ahead. What do you all think? Kane could be in prison, the ITSDA could be wildly discredited, Frank and his team could be made to face interrogating/ court marshaling, and The Commander could be concocting a new plan. And don't worry, I won't forget (and haven't forgotten) about writing the conclusion of New York's battle. Any thoughts sbout this possible jump?
This message was last edited by the GM at 01:58, Sun 05 June 2016.

Erm... Wow. You managed to put all three of Kane's scenes together.

As pleased as I am that this is over, I feel like people repeatedly messed up parts of Kane's personality. For instance, the nuclear bomb thing is not something he would do. He's too into killing people to just make something happen at a distance. More likely, he'd bomb the spot he was in, just because, but considering it would kill everyone there, It's probably best that you didn't do that. Gives me an idea though.

In the meantime, skipping ahead sounds fine! I was hoping he would make it to the prison eventually, so this is just an extra challenge. My initial plan was for him to steal an experimental ITSDA aircraft and go Kamikaze on the place. That would have been fun, but this is better.

(Unless he figured she would catch it and just wanted to drive her crazy and get her out of his shockingly bright, white hair).

Nah, but really... point taken. I'll make him more of a personal killer next time. I think that's part of why I liked The Commander's fight between Dieter and your character so much; he seemed to have a better handle on Kane than I do. At least I think so.

I agree that there's plenty of potential for Kane in prison. You could have him interact with the other prisoners and guards and/or use his newfound army in some twisted plot to harass the world while he sits there in the rec room, watching reruns. I don't know, actually, how it'll go. But I can't wait to find out.

Yeah, that does sound like fun.

For the final please get my powers right.

@ Ma Nature I like how you showed MK being seemingly supportive towards one side while egging on the other but then leaving the two sides at their throats.

A few nitpicks though. He may be eccentric but he's a bit more subdued, more inclined to lean back or lazily dodge. Also 'toodles' is a little too flamboyant if you get what I mean. He's supposed to be dramatic and theatrical not outright flaming for lack of a better phrase. Also he doesn't use portals to move, he uses portals as storage or to teleport others, but he himself doesn't use them (though that's my fault for being unclear).

Overall though you came the closest to portraying Khaos correctly though.