How to Describe People, Places, Etc.
There might be exceptions to these rules, depending on the context, but:
You’ve probably heard this one before: “Show, don’t tell.”
Think of what you’re trying to convey, then think of what descriptions would convey that point.
Instead of “she looked happy,” maybe “she was smiling widely as she skipped and hummed.”
Instead of “there had clearly just been a bar fight,” maybe “bloodied patrons fled, dragging unconscious buddies with them, leaving behind tipped furniture, shattered mugs and a few teeth.”
If you find yourself saying “she looked happy, with a beaming smile etc.” maybe skip the “she looked happy.” Don’t use more words than needed, don’t be redundant (unless maybe you’re really trying to emphasize something).
You can tell a quick story just with descriptions, without explicitly stating what happened. (Similar to above.)
For characters, I think facial expressions should be pointed out. It can give a quick idea of their mood, attitude, who they are as a person, which is often more important than other details.
I try to think, “what are the first things someone would notice about this person/place/thing?” and work down from there. Are they particularly tall or short, wide or thin? Glaring marks or noteworthy clothing?
Avoid being over detailed, instead aim to get a general idea across.
This might involve keeping things simpler and cutting excess details you had in mind.
As someone mentioned, players probably won’t remember every nagging detail, so there might not be a point in the first place.
Depending on what you’re playing on (tabletop, thearte of mind, roll20, Discord, forum), you might be able to just use pictures. (Granted probably accompanied by some description still.)
If you’re going to use pictures, you’re probably better off using them right when the thing is introduced, as opposed to afterward. This is because players (and you) will form their own mental image of something, and if you introduce a picture after the fact, it’ll probably conflict. (I hate when I think of a character or setting, but then can’t find a suitable picture.)