This is the place to tell me of strengths and weaknesses, rough spots, etc. of Malachai's Fourth World, what is listed in the computer file as Rocky Mountain DMZ.

Its a world where Germany and Japan won WW2, and for various reasons the Rocky Mountains is treated as a Demilitarized Zone between the two empires which makes the Rockies the only area of freedom left in the world.

PT

It was a good setting and all, but I think there might've been a bit too much going on... it got kind of confusing, lol.

I think that was my refereeing style and choices, although more source material to serve as guidelines doesn't hurt.  Sometimes things spin a bit out of my control.

Thanks.

PT