Re: Out of Character Discussion
Welcome, Iridia Silvermane. I'm just going to answer you here instead of in PM to save time. Love the character concept and the sheet looks good on first glance. Like you said, you need to do a little work on the format of your sheet, becuase without listing how many points you spent on skils and everything, it's going to be a monster to edit. Also, I need the points to be able to make suggestions.
Here is a monster from one of my other games from 2005:
This isn't the best example of a sheet, but it will do.
Gate Keeper
200-point nephilim warrior
ST 26 [234] HP 26 [-]
DX 11 [20] Will 10 [5]
IQ 9 [-20] Per 10 [5]
HT 11 [10] FP 10 [-3]
Dmg: 2d+2 thr/5d sw
Maul: 5d+6 crush
BL: 135
Basic Speed: 5.5
Dodge: 9 (8)
Basic Move: 2 (1) [-15]
Build: 9'1", ? lbs.
SM: +1
Age: 48
Appearance: Hideous [-16]
Languages: English Spoken (Native)/Written (None) [-3]
Advantages and Perks
Combat Reflexes [15]
High Pain threshold [10]
Disadvantages and Quirks
Bad Temper [-10]
Bloodlust [-10]
Callous [-5]
Duty [-15]
Lame (Crippled Leg) [-10]
Loner [-5]
No Sense of Humor [-10]
Quirk [-1]
Skills level Points Notes
Axe/Mace 8* 2 Parry 8
Brawling 10* 4 Parry 9
Broadsword 8* 2 Parry 8
Knife 8* 1 Parry 8
Shield 8* 1 Block 8
Two-Handed Axe/Mace 12* 16 Parry 10
* Including -3 for crippled leg
Point Summary
Attributes: 251
Advantages and Perks: 25
Disadvantages and Quirks: -103
Skills: 18
Total: 199
Equipment
Weapons Damage Reach Parry Cost Weight ST
Maul sw+6 cr 1, 2* 0U $270 40.5 15
Armor Price Weight DR Loc.
Heavy Steel Corselet $5,175 101.25 DR 7 torso, groin
Heavy Plate Arms $3,750 45 DR 7 arms
Heavy Plate Legs $3,600 62.5 DR 7 Legs
Great Helm $765 22.5 DR 7 skull, face, neck
Heavy Gauntlets $563 5.5 DR 5 hands
Sollerets $338 15.75 DR 4 feet
Totals:
Cost $14,461
Weight 267.5 lbs.
Encumbrance Light