Character Development (by BlueIllumination)
BlueIllumination"]This is supposed to go in the Venting forum, but I don’t want to post a thread of me whining. The following rant isn’t directed to anyone in particular, in fact, I have been guilty of a few of these myself, but this is based on my RP experiences.
Character development:
I cannot even begin to explain how character development is essential to RPing. Without spiritual, emotional, mental, and overall personal growth, a character is nothing more than a one-dimensional figure of someone’s imagination. Treat your characters like real people, with real flaws. Keep them true to themselves, and keep them realistic. One of the many reasons why I won’t play Shinigami is that, because of their age, most of them are well-seasoned veterans who have witnessed death and are therefore not as shaken up as their adhuman/spirit counterparts. This is not true for all of them, but is true for the majority. Though a death of a comrade, especially by one’s own hands, can rattle anyone, at least many of the Shinigami here have, or tried to learn how to cope with such trauma and devastation from the Quincy purge. Characters like that are no fun for me to play, hence, I stick with my two adhumans who will gleefully be emotionally scarred after seeing the slaughter in 2nd arc, one way or the other.
On that note of keeping things reasonable realistic… there is something disturbingly wrong if your character just saw people getting chopped up, mutilated, dismembered in the most gruesome ways, and the only thing he/she can do is look sad, sigh, and walk away. Different people react to things in different ways, but c’mon now! They just saw the freakkin holocaust! It’s one thing if he/she is used to seeing blood and guts and all that good stuff, but even a captain’s gotta think to him/herself something other than “Ah crap. Just killed good old Johnny. Guess I’ll need another 6th seat.” And if they do, explain why in their posts! What is your char feeling right now? How will they react to the lost of their loved ones after the mayhem? My main concern is that people are going to go one with their merry lives as if nothing life-changing ever occurred; unrealism can ruin a good RP. Horrific situations such as these are great times to reveal other sides of your character’s persona [for they DO have other sides to them, right…..?].
Unique characters:
It’s very hard to think of a character that is truly unique. Demon kids and rich girls with a heart of gold are hardly original. But don’t rip off the bad-guy or gentleman-who-likes-roses stereotype, without a twist of your own. Likewise, if you have an insane character – which are very fun to play, I will admit – could you explain why they are insane? Are they suffering dementia, schizophrenia; are they a sociopath ,what? What trauma triggered this behavior? It’s not necessary, but it gives him/her some depth, and let’s others appreciate his/her insanity, to some extent…
Demons/Angels/Elements/ “Going Dark”:
I really do regret giving Lilith a demon-fey, because it’s not original. Though I am a firm believer that any theme, any character idea can be good if done by a good RPer, the fact is, demons and angels, as well as a character whose abilities are based on the four elements [one is okay, but having all four is overkill] are pretty much a tiresome theme in movies, if not in just about every genre that uses them. Likewise, having your character going evil i.e. going dark, is just as boring. If he/she has lost their hope in humanity, and are redefining their moral values, and you want to expound on their inner conflict, by all means do it! But don’t say “some mystical-tistical energy thingie has possessed my char, and now he/she has strange dark powers and is going to kill all his friends.” I can’t think of many movies that HASN’T done that.
Powers:
Powers are nice. Powers are cool. But don’t give them a hodgepodge of random stuff just because it sounds cool. Since powers in Bleach are usually not given from person-to-person [Ichigo the exception], they are usually a reflection of a person’s soul. Orihime has a cute, childish mind, so her powers are fairies, fantasy-type characters. Chad wants to use his physical strength to protect others, so it’s not surprising that he possess armor. This RP is not directly based on the canon, you can take a different route, but sheesh… wouldn't it make sense for your char’s powers to be an extension of themselves? And if they are not [example, their abilities are handed down from their family], make them kinda original.
Romance:
Love is a strange thing. But no matter how drunk Cupid can get when he shoots his heart-shaped arrows in people’s asses, there has to be some basis for it. If two very random people get together and randomly fall in love, without even dating, and get randomly married, then something is wrong. Randomly wrong. You shouldn’t force your char to fall in love just because you want them to get married and have children for God-knows what reason. Let them do it naturally. If they are impulsive, horny people, that’s fine and very IC. If not, then….
Respect:
You may not like another RPer’s writing style. You may think he or she is a complete newb. You might be his or her archnemesis off the boards and want to completely and utterly ruin their lives, shatter their hopes, dash away their dreams, murder their families and run over their pets. That’s cool. But have the decency to read their posts and adjust your own posts accordingly. When Character A punches Character B’s teeth out, don’t write that Character B is eating a ham sandwich, watching a ballgame, venturing into another dimension, or anything of the sort. Not only does it ruin the whole thread with inconsistencies, but it’s just rude. And yes, this does include spelling their char’s name right. It’s in the [bleep]ing sig, for crying out loud!
And if I have done that to any of you, PM/IM me at once, I will be glad to correct it.
Evil:
A pet-peeve of mine: Please people, don’t ever say “evil grin, evil smirk, evil look on their face” or anything of the like when talking about your char, unless you are purposely trying make them look cheesy. It’s so F$%^ cliché, it’s not even funny. At least say “sinister”, goddamn!
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One-dimensional characters:
Simply put, make sure your char has some depth. Maybe your char is just a sad individual and cries a lot. That’s very IC and very fine. But be aware if they cry all the time, or laugh all the time, or sigh all the time. People don’t act a certain way ALL the time. In fact, it’s very IC to act OOC on occasion. I know some very depressed people, and even they manage to smile once in a while. In short, let them react in a variety of different, but still IC, ways, depending on the situation.
Power-gamers:
There are too many people who value powers over personality, in B|AS and abroad. When your char Shyunpo‘s for the sole purpose of Shyunpo-ing, when the only time you can write an in depth pages-long post is when describing an attack, when your list of abilities and spells/arts are longer than your background, then you, my friend, are focusing too much effort on power. In a hard-pressed situation, when all of your attacks are worthless, what are you going to do? Give two sentences of your char whining about it’s helplessness? Rping’s not about getting stronger and kicking more bacon [though, it’s a nice perk], it’s about watching your char develop and grow as a person. Remember, powers can be taken away, but individuality can only flourish.
On that note, let your chars be flawed. PC’s aren’t as strong as you’d like them to be. So don’t write a post detailing how Character B easily sideswipes an NPC, dodges another attack with grace and style, and then executes an excruciatingly long sequence of attacks with perfect, flawless accuracy. That’s BS. I want to see a captain trip in the middle of an attack, or an adhuman be completely off her mark and accidentally hit a fellow char. It’s okay to be human. Let them err. It’s fun, it’s interesting, and gives a much need break from all those others characters who try [and fail] to act cool.
Long applications:
Nothing wrong with adding some meat to your profile. But I KNOW I’m not the only one who hates reading tediously, and needlessly long character sheets. You don’t have to write about the creamy taste of a peanut-butter and jelly sandwich your character was eating on January 29, 1972. Quantity does not equal quality, for there are a couple of applications that are short and concise and easy on the eyes, and extremely long, boring apps that take me days finish. And to be brutally honest, if I don’t have the patience to read your profile, I simply won’t let my own chars interact with yours. Give your character some leeway to add onto history during the actual RP. There’s no fun in revealing every minute detail in the profile. As the saying goes, leave some room for imagination.
And if you do write a marvelously long application, you better damn well write marvelously long posts. You can’t tell me that you can whip up pages and pages to get in the RP, yet only have a few three-liners in the real storyline thread.
Rping yourselves:
I’m going to have to disagree with Ranko when she had once claimed that RPers can’t work with characters unless they are representing some part of them. People, we “roleplay” ourselves all the time in real life, so what’s the point in basing a character on yourself? RP is the time to explore new options, new ideas; hence, most of my characters either have nothing in common with me, or even better, people whom I normally would dislike. I don’t like music, yet Mei is a pop-star. I don’t like snakes or kids, yet here’s Lilith, a combination of both. I’ve played circus-performers, rapists, and mute undercooks, and I can honestly say that they and I are worlds apart. Playing such chars that are different from me gives me new prospects, and is simply much more interesting and fun for me to play, instead of a char based on myself.
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Okay, I am done for the night.
This message was last updated by the GM at 19:56, Tue 04 Apr 2017.