Well. I tryed to run Castlevania but I had a hard time making it interesting. So New World.

Anyway here is where you can give me a review of the world. What you liked and disliked.

I don't feel I was there long enough to really feel strongly one way or the other...But the way you wrote the death was well. I realize you wrote it like that to just get it done, but I would have liked to see how she would have at least tried and failed to survive.

On the one hand we both knew it was going to be an unavoidable death, but it was kinda unceremonious and a bit of a missed opportunity.

That is very true. I did mess up by ending it like that. I just wanted to start on the new world.


Would you like me to revise it to give you a bit of time before the Castle collapsed?

Na at most I would try to swat the incoming boulder and if the floor collapsed I may have tried to throw Warnerus out a window. If I took any books with me it was by accident as I may have been holding it when the roof came down.


Throwing Warnerus out a window would be both to save him and satisfaction of showing how much I don't like him.