Hoal Playtest

Hoal, Level 1 Genasi(Voidsoul) Swordmage Theme: Scholar
Initiative +0, Perception 11, Insight 11, Normal Vision HP: 25; Bloodied 12; Surges 8, Value 6 AC: 19; Fort 14, Reflex 14, Will 14 Resists: Psychic 5 Speed 6
[M] Melee Basic (Standard; At-Will) * Melee Basic
Longsword: +8 Vs. AC; 1d8+4 DMG Dagger: +8 Vs. AC; 1d4+4 DMG Unarmed: +5 Vs. AC; 1d4+4 DMG
[R] Ranged Basic (Standard; At-Will) * Ranged Basic
Dagger:+ 4 Vs. AC; 1d4+1 DMG, Range 5/10
[M] Greenflame Blade (Standard; At-Will) LV 1 * Arcane, Fire, Weapon
Longword: +8 Vs. AC; 1d8+4 Fire DMG Hit: All Adjacent to Target Enemies take Str(4) Fire DMG
[CB] Sword Burst (Standard; At-Will) LV 1 * Arcane, Force, Implement
Target: Each Enemy In Burst 1 Longsword:+ 5 Vs. Reflex; 1d6+4 Force DMG
[BL] Flame Cyclone (Standard; Encounter) LV 1 * Arcane, Fire, Implement
Target: Each Creature In Blast. Longsword: +5 Vs. Reflex; 1d8+8 (Int+Str) Fire DMG, Blast 3
[M] Burning Blade (Standard; Day) LV 1 * Arcane, Fire, Weapon
Lonwsword: +8 Vs. AC; 2d8+4 Fire DMG Effect: Until End of Encounter, my Melee attacks deal +str(4) Fire DMG. ...Is this applied before or after BB Attack Damage?
[CLASS] [CB] Aegis Of Assault (Minor; At-Will) LV 1 * Arcane, Teleport
Target: One creature in Burst 2. Effect:  I mark the Target, One at a time ala Quarry. Other Marking powers stack. If my Marks make an Attack that does not include me and hits, and Marked is within 10, I can Reaction Teleport Adjacent to Marked, and make a Melee Basic vs them.
[RACE] Void Assumption (Minor; Encounter) LV 1 *
Effect:  I cease to exist.  No LoS or LoE To or From me during. At Start Of My Next Turn, I reappear in a tile within 3. Ignores Anti-Teleport effects to do wording ;P
[THEME] Use Vulnerability (Trigger; Encounter) LV 1 * Arcane
Trigger: You succeed on a monster knowledge check against a monster you can see or hear... Why specify that, if you're already making a monster check? Effect: If your check meets or Exceeds the Hard DC for the Monster's LV (What?) you gain +4 Power Bonus to all defenses against the monster's attacks until End Of Your Next Turn.  Also, until End Of Your Next Turn you gain +DMG=Int(4) vs targets, but not to DMG types they resist.   If your check does not meet or exceed target DC, your attacks to target deal half DMG Until End Of Your Next Turn.
Alignment: Unaligned Languages; Common, Primordial, Abyssal spanish Elven.  0 Acrobatics, 9 Arcana*, 9 Athletics*, -1 Bluff, -1 Diplomacy, 1 Dungeoneering,  7 Endurance*, 1 Heal, 9 Hist*, 1 Insight, -1 Intimidate, 1 Nature, 1 Percep,  4 Religion^, 0 Stealth, -1 Streetwise, 0 Thievery STR 18(+4/+4) DEX 11(+1/+1) WIS 13(+0/+0) CON 10(+0/+0) INT 18(+4/+4) CHA 8(-1/-1) Equipment:  Longsword, Leather Armor.

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Racial attributes: Genasi. +2 INT/STR Size Medium. 6 speed. Language Common, Primordial. +2 Endurance, Nature.
Elemental Origins: As Genasi Ancestors are native to the Elemntal Chaos (according to Race details, if not Tim details?), I am considered Elemental Origin for the purpose of effects dealing with such. (Charsheet quick blurb says Elemental origin instead of Natural).
Voidsoul: +1 Will. +5 Resist Psychic Per Tier.

Class Attributes:
Swordmage
Armor Proficiencies: Cloth, Leather.
Weapon Proficiencies: Simple Melee, Military Light Blade, Military Heavy Blade, Simple Ranged.
Implements: Any Light or Heavy Blade
Defense Bonus: +2 Will.
Swordbond: Can call sword from short distances (10) or repair it.
Swordmage Aegis: Aegis of Assault.
Swordmage Warding: +1 AC, which increases to +3 if welding a blade with one hand and nothing in the other.

Theme Benefits:
Scholar
Level 1: Gain one additional language (Pick between Draconic, Dwarven, Elven), Gain Vulnability Power. [Picked Elven].
Level 5: Chose training in one new skill and one new language.
  Skill selection; Arcana, Dungeoneering, History, Nature, Religion. If already trained in all, instead +2 Bonus to those skills.
  Language Selection; Draconic, Dwarven, Elven. If you already know those, pick one language from the language list.
Level 10: You know all the Cannon languages. All of them.  Homebrew languages in a Campaign you are at the GM's mercy if you know or not.
  You can also attempt an Arcana check (Hard DC of your LV) to decipher a message written in code or protected my magical obscurest.

Background Benefit:  Parentage -Cult Raised [Birth]; Abyssal Language Perk.

Critical: N/A

Special: When an enemy hits me with Vs. Will, or deals Psychic DMG, that enemy takes my Resist Psychic(5) Value in Psychic DMG.(Feat)

Feats:  Empty Mind(Lv1).

Additional Equipment:   S.A.K, Climber's Kit, Crowbar, Tent, Lantern, +Rations(10), +Waterskin, Oil(3), Flask(3), Torch(5).
  Dagger.

Cash Etc:
Total GP Value: 16.11

Char Desc

Dragon Mag Ish 380:

Voidsoul: Black skin; energy lines of the deepest lack of color; bald with utter darkness rising from the head.

  Saying Haol looks like a typical Voidsoul Genasi isn't an option.  First of all, there needs to be enough Voidsouls to establish a stylistic stereotype for there to be a typical Voidsoul.  Second of all, his elemental tracings mass into a fist sized blotch in his chest, the 'utter lack of color' giving the appearance of looking into a, well, hole.
  Hoal's facial and head lines... I'm too lazy/wording fail to describe right now.
  Anti-Glowy lines out of the way, Haol is a five and a half footish Tall white eyed, coal black skinned linebacker of a Genasi.  His bald head trailing a short flow of Utter Darkness many a Goth to come would kill for as a hairstyle.

  Hoal Dresses like a Stereotypical Jedi, with his close fitted leather armor generally concealed underneath his cliche robe look.  A cloth wrapped scabbard holds a Longsword.

Char BG:  Hoal was born to a Cindersoul Father and a Voidsoul Mother.  We'll leave it at the fact that the whole side of Hoal's Mother's family isn't around anymore, and his father left him to be raised by an Ioun Monastery early in his life.  Over the years, Hoal had carried every less than restricted book in the monastery at least once.  Ancient bound tomes can be freaking heavy, more so in stacks.  However, being an unpaid librarian for years is not the worst thing in the world, and the very deity they worshipped along with enough long silent stares making them feel awkward lead to Hoal being able to study much of the Historical and Arcane texts the order held.
  As an elder child, Hoal asked if he was ready to leave the monastery to seek out knowledge on his own.  The priests told him it was too dangerous for a child such as him to make such journeys.  Hoal accepted this for the truth it held.  As a young man, he left feeling no need to ask.  For now he was dangerous as well, and the risks of the world would face his blade if need be.